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Re: One Night Only
Ah, the teen years....yes, I have been in a situation like the one described....good times, good times. The poem (if I may call it so?) is somewhat disjointed, as if ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Hero
Galloping, galloping, ride through the night, Before you the darkness, behind you the light. You outrun the beat of your heart in your flight: The choice now before you, to ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Bloom and Die
Oh my gosh wow i didnt expect such great feedback! your reviews literally made my day. Im so glad u liked it. THank you so much!
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Rebel's Creed
I am the fire That wakes from the ashes I am the light At the end of this tunnel I am the eyes That see a new horizon I am ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Bloom and Die
Before our death, we briefly thrive Enchanted, wild, free, alive Sweet madness that consumes this life Of love and hatred, ceaseless strife Hurling ourselves from a dizzying height We paint ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: A weird, random rap...thing...
haha that was great. i hate to just repeat what everybody else is saying but it would make a pretty darn good rap verse lol. tell your little bro hi ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Love
Ello there, sweet. I see you have joined the brave band of poets throughout history who have dared to write about the great mystery they call Love. Actually, I must ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Haikus
Thanks! the funny thing is, I wrote every single one of those while taking the ACT test because I finished really early and was bored lol. im glad u like ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Maroon
aw you guys are too nice. muchas gracias! i love the sea and it inspires many of my poems. this was actually composed while standing in the breaking surf and ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Haikus
The violet stardust Softly falling to the earth Glittering heaven Grey souls and shadows Cold and silent, whisper in The dark before dawn The moonlight flashes On his blade, silver ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Maroon
The sea rolls over frozen lands and under empty skies; The sea gulls fade into the sun and call their last goodbye. Voices in the wind and waves and echoes ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Ask the Stars
A star looks down upon the earth, a diamond heart that burns On black coals at the midnight's birth, while constellations turn. O brilliant star, a queen upon the ebony ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: a little dream in abstract
red on black blue on gold and not a drop to drink one three six five dance to dust drink the moon and wear the sun around your finger for ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Jacob's Ladder
Okay that totally made no sense and that was exactly why I liked it! The punctuation was bit emily dickinsonish, and I can't say i prefer that style, but to ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: My Requiem
O prison cell, surrounding me with bars like burnished spears, In this silent tomb the echoes of my life are all I hear. The key was buried long ago, in ...
Dec 23, 2009
